Hey, tell me what you think of this punk lyrics i wrote PLEASE!?

What I do or don't think about it doesn't really matter right now. What matters is the fact that you are putting it out there before copyrighting it. If it is good, you may find someone else recording it and performing it and you get screwed. It is a rough business. You need to copyright your stuff before you publish it. Songwriters get ripped off all day long!