Un Debeer
Monday, August 15, 2011
Can you hear the tolling of the bell?
9 beats in line one. Take Aquarius's suggestion. Excellent villanelle. The key to me is the 1st and 3rd lines of the first stanza. Your word choices proved you know the key. My compliments.
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